i want to make my resume better, let me know what needs changing:) p.s where my name and address is etc i put ” there so i do not have my details online! ..
Resume
Ella Duffy
Personal Details
Name: ”
Date of birth: 17/8/1991
Age: 17 years.
Address: ”
Telephone: Home: (03) 6239 9043
Mobile : ”
Email: ”
Availability to work: Week nights, Sunday,
Personal Statement
I am looking to gain employment in the hospitality industry. I’m Currently looking for a second casual job,
And I am able to start work immediately. I am a friendly, honest, sociable, reliable and a hard working person who is willing and capable to help assist customers. I work great independently and working with others.
Education
I currently attend Rosny College in 2008, I studied 6 subjects.
1. Health Studies
2. English
3. Life Science (Biology)
4. Tourism
5. First Aid
6. Cakes biscuits and confectionery
This year in 2009 at Rosny College I’m currently Studying 4 subjects.
1. Vocational Education and Training (VET) Tourism
2. French
3. Business Management
4. Business Computing
Previous Education:
Cottage School 1996-2000
South Arm Primary School 2001-2003
Rose Bay High School 2004-2007
Work Experience:
Current casual job at Famish/say cheese cafe since 15th November
Duties included:
* Handling money
* Serving Customers
* Coffee Making
* Waitressing
* Cleaning duties.
Skills:
* High computer skills great knowledge with Microsoft Word, Excel, and PowerPoint, and Internet
* Great Communication skills
* First Aid certificate
* RSA ( responsible service of alcohol) certificate
Achievements
· 40 hour famine 2004-2007
· Rose bay Achievement award 2007
· Rose bay academic award 2006
· Red Cross regular blood donation giver
· Current learner’s driver’s license
· Certificate of participation in Environmental service program- 2007
Hobbies and interests
· Fashion
· Cooking
· Reading
· Socializing
· Traveling
· Camping
· Viewing films
· Music
· fitness
Reference
Anne Peterson
Postion: Family friend.
Family Friend: phone 0400500204
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I used to do Executive resumes for a living. Yours needs better formatting. Take out the age and dob. Your wording could use some retooling. Don’t start a sentence with “And”. In general, take out all unnecessary wording. State where you’re going to school, and simply state “studying Business Management and Computing”. No need to list all your classes. Use Power language. You can look up such things on the internet under “Resume building language”.
In general, list your strengths first, your weaknesses not at all. Format cleanly, and on one page. Make your formatting noticeably neat and precise. Put your name in Bold lettering. Leave out your personal address, date of birth. Just list your phone number. Good luck in landing the perfect job.
I would take out the hobbies, instead of personal statement, put Objective. I would center your name and add. , You really do not have to put down what classes you have took or are taking, and I would really try to put all your info. on one page, employers are not going to read alot, also you could also put refrences upon request.